作业帮帮我看看有没有错误被~Good morning,my name is hefang.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself.I would like to answer whatever you may raise,and I hope I can make a good performance today.I am 20¬years old a
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帮我看看有没有错误被~Good morning,my name is hefang.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself.I would like to answer whatever you may raise,and I hope I can make a good performance today.I am 20¬years old a
帮我看看有没有错误被~
Good morning,my name is hefang.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself.I would like to answer whatever you may raise,and I hope I can make a good performance today.
I am 20¬years old and I am currently a sophomore.In my spare time,I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs,watching English movies or TV programs,or even attending the activities held by liyang crazy English.I think language is very interesting.So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge.
马上要口语考试了,帮我改改稿子,
帮我看看有没有错误被~Good morning,my name is hefang.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself.I would like to answer whatever you may raise,and I hope I can make a good performance today.I am 20¬years old a
...I would like to answer whatever (questions) you may raise, and I hope I can (give my best shot) today.
改relating to English为related to (English language learning)
将activities前面的the删掉,不必加,因为这里并非特指哪些活动,（个人看法）
I think language is very interesting.这里的language改成English
literature似乎不用s为好吧
后面的enlarge my knowledge改成broaden my mind如何?或者enrich (expand) my knowledge
总之,都比enlarge为好,enlarge是把什么东西放大,如果enlarged prostate前列腺肿大,例子举的不好