You are so lucky, because you can choose to love me or not, but myself only have to choose from loving you or loving you more.这句话的语法有没有错误?总觉得后边半句怪怪的,是为了强调么?我觉得这样写会比较舒服:but

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You are so lucky, because you can choose to love me or not, but myself only have to choose from loving you or loving you more.这句话的语法有没有错误?总觉得后边半句怪怪的,是为了强调么?我觉得这样写会比较舒服:but

You are so lucky, because you can choose to love me or not, but myself only have to choose from loving you or loving you more.这句话的语法有没有错误?总觉得后边半句怪怪的,是为了强调么?我觉得这样写会比较舒服:but
You are so lucky, because you can choose to love me or not, but myself only have to choose from loving you or loving you more.
这句话的语法有没有错误?总觉得后边半句怪怪的,是为了强调么?
我觉得这样写会比较舒服:
but only loving you or loving more I can choose from
望高手指教~
谢谢几位。
看来原句没错是肯定的了,只是比较冗长
我改的那句是在I can前省略了个that
but only loving you or loving you more (that) I can choose from
是这样的话是正确的吗?

You are so lucky, because you can choose to love me or not, but myself only have to choose from loving you or loving you more.这句话的语法有没有错误?总觉得后边半句怪怪的,是为了强调么?我觉得这样写会比较舒服:but
我认为,原句是正确的.原句后半句没有为了强调,只是用了一个choose.from的句式
而lz改过之后的句子是错误的,可以改成but only loving you or loving you more is what i can choose from.