请帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误.You used to study really hard.And got grades pretty good.You had many great ways to study,such as making card,listening to tapes,asking teacher for help,study with a group.At present,You are changed

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请帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误.You used to study really hard.And got grades pretty good.You had many great ways to study,such as making card,listening to tapes,asking teacher for help,study with a group.At present,You are changed
请帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误.
You used to study really hard.And got grades pretty good.You had many great ways to study,such as making card,listening to tapes,asking teacher for help,study with a group.At present,You are changed.You don't do homework anymore.You would rather play computer games than read interesting books.I think playing computer is bad for your health,and it could make you get tired.What can you do to realx yourself?Ithink you can taking a walk in a park,going to a concert or a museum.
15分会扣掉几分？You had many great ways to study，such as making card,listening
老天，低年级那。初中水平差不多。

请帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误.You used to study really hard.And got grades pretty good.You had many great ways to study,such as making card,listening to tapes,asking teacher for help,study with a group.At present,You are changed
第二行：study换成studying（such as+doing）
第二行：You are changed——你被改变,不太合适.应为自己主动改变,改为You change
第五行：can taking改为can take,going to a concert 改为 go to a concert (can后面加一般现在时）
这要看评分标准了,还有改卷的严格程度
初中,那还不错哦,应该扣3、4分左右.

至于错误，楼上已经解答了！不过我说说对你的作文的看法
1。你的作文读起来没有一点连贯性！逻辑顺序太差！.
2。没有文采，好的词汇和短语没有几个！最严重的是全是简单句，连接上很差！
当然我不知道你念几年级，如果是初学者，那么已经足够了！以后写得多了就好了！但如果是高年级的，那么我就实在不敢恭维啦！
如果我是老师，最多给一半分！...

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第一行: and 理论上不能做句首词的,你这句打了前面打了句号那就是没主语.and前面打分号可以
第二行: listening to tapes, >listen to tapes.
第三行: dont > didn't
嗯 ,,第六行,can +take... 情态动词后面加动词原型