请帮我改改语法错误.Thanks to the Sales team and Marketing team close cooperation,successful holds the Club Conference touring exhibition activity in the third quarter.The touring exhibition has covered 6 cities,10 provinces and 259 key custo

请帮我改改语法错误.Thanks to the Sales team and Marketing team close cooperation,successful holds the Club Conference touring exhibition activity in the third quarter.The touring exhibition has covered 6 cities,10 provinces and 259 key custo
请帮我改改语法错误.
Thanks to the Sales team and Marketing team close cooperation,successful holds the Club Conference touring exhibition activity in the third quarter.The touring exhibition has covered 6 cities,10 provinces and 259 key customers.We bring to success sales volume 7,275 box,91% were the A series products,the high end product sales volume achieved 21%,has raised the third quarter sales volume peak successfully!Conference content is rich and form is novel,attempts the training form regarding us which promotes,received has retailed business the strong repercussion.We also heightened confidence and cohesive force of the channel customers and enhanced the channel interior influence successfully.At the same time,M department team spirit also once more obtains fully unfolds!
销售部门和市场部门紧密合作,在第三季度成功举行俱乐部商业训练营第一期的巡展活动.巡展覆盖了6个城市,10个省份,共面向了259个重点BAS,实现销量7275箱,其中91%为A系列产品,高端产品销量达到21%,成功的掀起了第三季度的销量高峰!会议内容丰富,形式新颖,对于我们尝试推出的培训形式,收到了分销商的强烈反响.也成功地增强了渠道客户的信心和凝聚力,提高了渠道内部的影响力.同时,M团队精神也再次得到充分展现!

请帮我改改语法错误.Thanks to the Sales team and Marketing team close cooperation,successful holds the Club Conference touring exhibition activity in the third quarter.The touring exhibition has covered 6 cities,10 provinces and 259 key custo
有好多单词是直译的,在句子中有几处缺谓语,重新翻译一下,仅工参考!
In the third season,we have holded successfully the first touring exhibition of the Club commerence training activity because of the close cooperation between sales apartment and market apartment .This activity covers six cities,10 provinces,and facing to 259 BAS.We have selled 7275 box ,in the percent of 91,is for A series products,21% in the high value of product.Conference content is rich and form is novel,we attempt to try the training form regarding us and promote ,receive has retailed business the strong effection.We also heightened confidence and cohesive force of the channel customers and enhanced the channel interior influence successfully.At the same time,M department team spirit also once more obtains fully unfolds!