求英语高人,看一看我这篇短文有没有语法的错?I think everyone all has dream .But I don't have dream.If you ask me what do you want to be ,I will answer her sorry ,I don't kown .Meby I want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a policeman and m

求英语高人,看一看我这篇短文有没有语法的错?I think everyone all has dream .But I don't have dream.If you ask me what do you want to be ,I will answer her sorry ,I don't kown .Meby I want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a policeman and m
求英语高人,看一看我这篇短文有没有语法的错?
I think everyone all has dream .But I don't have dream.If you ask me what do you want to be ,I will answer her sorry ,I don't kown .Meby I want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a policeman and more.
I don't have a good idea .I have two brothers .they all want to be a doctor .My mother is a ..,my father is a ..They want me can happy every day .Now I must study English very well .I think I can do it last ,I hope everyone good good study ,day day up.That all ,thank you!

求英语高人,看一看我这篇短文有没有语法的错?I think everyone all has dream .But I don't have dream.If you ask me what do you want to be ,I will answer her sorry ,I don't kown .Meby I want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a policeman and m
everyone 后面的all 去掉
第二行第五个词 her 改成you 前后一致 然后加上 ,“sorry ,i do not（不要用缩写） know.然后不是Meby 是Maybe
第二大段 第一行 a doctor改成 doctors
They want me can happy every day 改成they hope i can...
Last改成 at last 或者lastly
good good study ,day day up这个真的是中式英语 开玩笑可以 写成作文就不对了
PS 你现在读小学吧?还需练习

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应改为
1.I think everyone all has dreams.
2.I dont have a dream.
3.If you ask me what I want to be
4.I will be sorry because I cant answer this.
5.I want to be a teacher,a doctor,a po...

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应改为
1.I think everyone all has dreams.
2.I dont have a dream.
3.If you ask me what I want to be
4.I will be sorry because I cant answer this.
5.I want to be a teacher,a doctor,a policeman or something else.
6.They all want to be doctors.
7.They hope that I can happy every day .
8.At last.I hope that everyone will make great progress.
9.That is all.

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开篇就错！先学会用英语想，再写。用汉语想，没戏的。努力吧，请记住，no minds, no mouths。没心没嘴，这时铁律！

There are too many faults in this passage.