英文信!题目的要求：1.your friend li ming has written to invite you to go to his hometown together with him and you are willing to accept his invitation.write a reply to li ming,1.to express your appreciation and acceptance of his invitation;

英文信!题目的要求：1.your friend li ming has written to invite you to go to his hometown together with him and you are willing to accept his invitation.write a reply to li ming,1.to express your appreciation and acceptance of his invitation;
英文信!
题目的要求：
1.your friend li ming has written to invite you to go to his hometown together with him and you are willing to accept his invitation.write a reply to li ming,
1.to express your appreciation and acceptance of his invitation;
　　2.to ask about his schedule for the trip;
　　3.to ask about what necessary preparations you need to make.
　　you should write approximately 100 words.do not sign your name at the end of your letter.use "wang lin" instead.you do not need to write the address.
我的回答：
Dear Li Ming,
I am very excitied about hearing that you invited me to go to your hometown together with you.I am pleased to accept your invitation.Owing to I come to your hometown first,Could you tell me when we will start and ,What's the ways to go to the hometown,by bus or by train By the way,what do you think that what I should prepare for any necessary things?could you recommand to me Thank you for your Invitating.
Looking forward to your reply!
Sincerely Yours
Wang Lin
我这样写大致合不合要求?语法和写信的格式有错吗?请给我评点一下!

英文信!题目的要求：1.your friend li ming has written to invite you to go to his hometown together with him and you are willing to accept his invitation.write a reply to li ming,1.to express your appreciation and acceptance of his invitation;
格式上,首先段落中间要空一行,然后段落开头顶格写不要空两格.落款和开头都写在左边.结尾是yours sincerely,中文名可以正序也可以倒序,但是你这样是错是,比如你是王林,英文名应该要么是 WANG Lin或者Lin Wang
内容上,首先第一句有过多内容和题目原句完全一致,建议替换说法或者起码一些词语.I'm pleased这个说法不好,有你尊他卑之意,建议改成delighted.Owing to我没见过,建议不要乱用,写As this would be my first visit to your hometown,could you tell me where to start with?And how to travel to there,by bus or train?In additional,what necessary preparation do you think should take place prior to departure?Would you please give me some advice?感谢应该放在第一句,或者干脆最后说i'd thank you again for your kindly invitation.