2011苏锡常镇二模英语答案.作文是封回信的!

2011苏锡常镇二模英语答案.作文是封回信的!
2011苏锡常镇二模英语答案.
作文是封回信的!

2011苏锡常镇二模英语答案.作文是封回信的!
你要的是一模的作文吧,的确是书信类作文,二模还没有考
　　第五部分 书面表达(满分25分)
　　认真阅读LiHua写给SuHua的信.假设你是SuHua,请根据信中的具体内容给LiHua回复.
　　注意：开头和结尾已经写好,词数150左右,
　　Dear Su Hua,
　　I need your help.In last week’s oral English Competition,I was asked this question,“If you are asked to donate an hour every day,what would you do and why?” I just replied that I would use the hour to relax myself as we have been working very hard in school and that I would also use the hour to learn to play the piano as it has been my childhood dream.
　　However,the judges commented that my answer to the question was not to the point.As a result,I didn’t get the award as expected.
　　Can you tell me why my answer was not to the point?How will you answer this question?
　　Look forward to heating from you.
　　Best wishes,
　　Li Hua
　　Dear Li Hua,
　　Thank you for your email about the question “If you are asked to donate an hour every day,what would you do and why?”.I agree with the judges that your answer is not to the point.
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　　Best wishes,
　　Su Hua
　　答案：
　　Dear LiHua,
　　Thank you for your email ablaut the question “If you are asked to donate an hour every day,what would you do and why?” I agree with the judges that your answer is not to the point.
　　From your reply,I can see you misunderstand the word “donate”,which has something to do with belying others.You may get to the point if the question is put like this:“If you can spend an hour every day helping others,what would you do and why?”
　　If I were you,I would answer the question tike this.
　　“If I am asked to donate an hour every day,I will do two things.First,I will spend half an hour walking around the scho91,picking up rubbish.As students we all wish to live and study in a clean environment.Second,I will use another half an hour to help my neighbour’s son with his lessons because his parents are too busy to do so.By doing so,I not only help others,but also benefit a lot.”
　　I hope my answer will be of some help to you.( 150词)
　　Best wishes.
　　Su Hua